frostward
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Jun 13, 2016 23:34:16 GMT -5
Post by frostward on Jun 13, 2016 23:34:16 GMT -5
Eh, why not the woods?
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Jun 22, 2016 22:50:24 GMT -5
Post by Viempth on Jun 22, 2016 22:50:24 GMT -5
 It doesn't matter how fast you move if she see's you and kills you. Go in the woods.  Right!  Woah, what's she doing now!?   More walls start to rise ahead of you! She must have found out where you were going somehow! It seems like escaping won't be so easy... What do you do now? |
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Jun 24, 2016 23:19:57 GMT -5
Post by nightclaw on Jun 24, 2016 23:19:57 GMT -5
Try digging a tunnel
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Jul 4, 2016 20:55:50 GMT -5
Post by Viempth on Jul 4, 2016 20:55:50 GMT -5
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Jul 5, 2016 19:45:08 GMT -5
Post by Commander Tumbles on Jul 5, 2016 19:45:08 GMT -5
Alright gang, let's split up!
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Jul 6, 2016 12:24:17 GMT -5
Post by nightclaw on Jul 6, 2016 12:24:17 GMT -5
You can probably get past her if you both run at an acute angle to her, and then meet back up further along.
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Jul 7, 2016 22:22:34 GMT -5
Post by Viempth on Jul 7, 2016 22:22:34 GMT -5
Alright gang, let's split up! You can probably get past her if you both run at an acute angle to her, and then meet back up further along.  Aeron: What!? What if she goes after you, I can't protect you if-Donnella: There's no time! Just do it!     Oh Shit! What do you do now? by the way, do my images convey information well, or are they unclear or confusing? I know what the pictures mean, but I have no idea whether they communicate well to anyone else.
feedback on any part of the adventure is always welcome! |
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Post by nightclaw on Jul 8, 2016 2:42:49 GMT -5
((I think you do a good job. You could say that that is acute image, if you catch my meaning.))
1. try not to fall down
2. cut and run
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Jul 15, 2016 21:34:45 GMT -5
Post by Viempth on Jul 15, 2016 21:34:45 GMT -5
 Nailed it.  Did not nail it.   Cinaatshyyer: Donnella Edison....
Cinaatshyyer: Are you unwilling to comply?What do you do now!? ((I think you do a good job. You could say that that is acute image, if you catch my meaning.)) Thanks !! That's good to know. Also btw commands for Donna or Aeron are both fine |
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Jul 19, 2016 21:09:11 GMT -5
Post by nightclaw on Jul 19, 2016 21:09:11 GMT -5
Donnella: Would it really be so bad to see what she wants from you, since it doesn't look like you can escape?
Aeron: Next time you do a magic power, say "I've got an air-on." It works on so many levels.
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Jul 20, 2016 9:19:15 GMT -5
via mobile
Post by Commander Tumbles on Jul 20, 2016 9:19:15 GMT -5
You have no choice, it's time for the nuclear option:
Lick
Her
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frostward
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Jul 30, 2016 3:42:32 GMT -5
Post by frostward on Jul 30, 2016 3:42:32 GMT -5
Aeron: trip over something insignificant.
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Jul 30, 2016 16:51:24 GMT -5
Post by Viempth on Jul 30, 2016 16:51:24 GMT -5
Donnella: Would it really be so bad to see what she wants from you, since it doesn't look like you can escape?  Donnella: NO!
Donnella: I mean no, I'm not!
Donnella: Let's just... talk. Cinaatshyyer: You want to talk?
Cinaatshyyer: After what you've done? After marking my flesh? Disrespecting me? Disrespecting my god?Donnella: Um... Yes?  Cinaatshyyer: Alright.Aeron: trip over something insignificant.  Donnella: Okay so can you just like, tell me what it is specifically you want from me?Cinaatshyyer: We believe that you can aid our god.Donnella: Yeah, I got that. But how? And who is 'we', and how do you see me helping exactly, and-
Donnella: Which spirit do you even serve? What do you want? Cinaatshyyer: We do not serve some mean and feeble spirit, but the one true GOD.
Cinaatshyyer: The Prism Beast, our Lord of Rainbows, whose Eye is the sun.
Cinaatshyyer: WOBNIARYou have never heard of a spirit by that name. Cinaatshyyer: What we want is nothing less than rebirth. This world is diseased, and we will make a more beautiful one in its place.
Cinaatshyyer: The Beast will devour this realm's rulers and the pretender gods, shatter this wretched universe,  Cinnatshyyer: and, from its pieces, a new, brighter world will be forged. You REALLY don't think you want to help these people out. At least now you feel vindicated in running away from her! Where the hell is Aeron, anywhere? What do you do? It took me way too long to figure out what to do for that second to last panel... do you like it?
Also, really sorry that i couldn't use every suggestion, but this update was already really long (and late) and I didn't know how to fit that other stuff into it. But whenever I don't use a suggestion I DO keep it in mind to possibly use later, so I'm not gonna totally ignore anybody's ideas or anything |
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Jul 30, 2016 19:18:01 GMT -5
Post by nightclaw on Jul 30, 2016 19:18:01 GMT -5
point out that wobnair is literally rainbow spelled backwards, and then point and laugh at her
Alternative: go with her, there'll be a better chance to get away later, than now you're here with flat feet and no easy path to escape down.
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frostward
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Aug 1, 2016 22:33:31 GMT -5
Post by frostward on Aug 1, 2016 22:33:31 GMT -5
Aeron: Stealth crawl in your clunky armor.
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